Saturday 29 March 2014

The Birds by Kiedis



The birds want to listen to the story, “Flea and Robber Cat.”  The green bird went up and the purple and white bird went down.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kiedis,
    I really enjoyed reading your story.
    I love how you used some describing words to explain the colours of the birds.
    :)Bryan.

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  2. Hi Kiedis,
    That was an awesome story and that was an amazing photo.
    I liked how you told me what the birds were doing
    :) From Marley

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  3. Hi Kiedis'
    I loved your story about the budgies. It is so nice that you read them stories. I liked the way you described what they were doing.
    Sandie

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